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Re: I Kissed a Girl
i AGREE WITH Dr. Jamie Bondage IT SEEM LIKE A PROLOGUE BUT YES BY ALL MEANS MAKE IT A LONGER STORY I WOULD SO BE INTERESTED IN READING IT OH ...
Jul 23, 2008 -
Re: How It Used To Be
A Burden Has Been Lifted The World Has Finally Shifted Can It Really Be He's Finally Over Me Times Gone By Fast Its Finally Ok To Think About The Past ...
Jul 13, 2008 -
Re: Poisoned Roses--Chapter 8
Okay i am confused in the last chapter u said that carmen called sophia and told her to ride with "pretty-boy" yet he gets mad about it ? im confused
Jul 6, 2008 -
Re: Goddess Fallen
WOW!!!! I really like this story especially now that their eyes have met there is no telling how this will end up... For once I couldn't find any mispelled words ...
Jul 4, 2008 -
Re: Thirteen Kisses: Part Two
ok i have read both chapters of your story and i am in L>O>V>E with it !!!!!!!! There were a few speling errors but other than that i L>O>V>E it ...
Jun 29, 2008 -
Re: Keri's Love Chapter Two Part Five
i LOVE your stories but i have seen ALOT of puncuation marks and misspelles word and so on and so forth but other than that I am REALLY into your ...
Jun 24, 2008 -
Re: How to Start Over
ok i agree with basically everyone who did a review i just have one question....who the duck is candy?
Jun 24, 2008 -
Re: Mend my broken heart
QUOTE :I looked at me again, smiling. shouldn't that be HE looked at me again (this is the only typo i seen) awww i am speechless that was SUCH a ...
May 25, 2008 -
Re: Werewolf's Bride
oh my god I LOVED IT i didn't get up to make my bed like i was told i couldn't stop reading this story but i agree with Sythe in ...
May 25, 2008 -
Re: Opposite of a Straight Path > Chapter 2
yet again I LOVE the story pleas ekeep me posted i actually didn't see any typos so I believe you are doing REALLY well and yet again PLEASE keep me ...
May 24, 2008 -
Re: Big Shot Screaming: Part Two!
OH MY GOD this has such good emotion demostration in it i LOVE your story PLEASDE keep me posted
May 22, 2008 -
Re: Fast Lane (chapter 2)
in all else good story but a few typos I am to tired to give you a REAL critic I might reread it tomorrow and let you know what I ...
May 22, 2008 -
Re: Fast Lane
As usual I LOVED your story please keep me posted on your next chapter
May 21, 2008 -
Re: Opposite of a Straight Path
i have to agree with "summerless" you need to work on your story just a little bit i like the idea of the story but like "summerless" said you need ...
May 21, 2008 -
Re: Never ending bliss~ Chapter 2
OH MY GOODNESS this is a good story is this to be the final chapter in the series I should seriously hope not to me this chapter was FAR less ...
May 20, 2008