soccerfreak2516

This looks interesting so far. I noticed a few grammar mistakes, but if you read through it again, I'm sure you'll find them. Can't wait to see more.

Thanks for the comments!! the one eye is kinda messed up, and there's a random line in the middle of it...but aside from that, I like this one This is ...

yeah...the sword's from my story, and is magical, and the wrist guard-thing (i'm sure there's probably some actual name for it, but I don't know what it is) adjusts according ...

I can't color anything for my I'm just putting up some of my black and white drawings for now That one goes with my story... Also for my story which ...

wow.. *blinks* that's amazing... Love the Swiss girl, the oriental lady, and the Erik/Christine picture (which would be even more awe-inspiring with better shading) Keep up the great work!

Those are really cool. Swords fascinate me for some reason... lol and if I may quote Sam, I so wish I had photoshop...

whether you believe it or not, I've never heard that song... others by her, yes, but not that one. Yeah...the list of 'popular' music I've heard is kinda pathetic So ...

I love this! What did I do during lunch and recess? Where did I go all by myself? Naria, Faerie, Avalon, Middle Earth. You name it, I've been there. Even ...

I run toward the light, Always pushing toward the edge of the darkness, Looking for a chance to be seen, A chance to finally step out of the shadow that ...

I love the imagery you use. The only problem I see is the last three lines of the first stanza. It seems sort of awkward/confusing. I think it would make ...

You're really good at description and imagery. Only problems I see are that a few of the lines are slightly awkward, and some punctuation needs to be changed or added. ...

I really like the idea behind this. The topic of mirrors is one of my personal favorites. My only real complaint is that parts of it are repetitive. You use ...