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Re: Survival for the Dead
SATIRE! Please do not get offended of anything I say in here, my AP English teacher asked us to write a piece similar to The Modest Proposal (a famous satire) ...
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: What If It's Fate?
This is not only very well written but it is also a magnificent poem. You stay on topic, it makes sense, and I truly love the line “In words ensconced ...
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: Secretly loving you.
This is truly one of a kind! I love this and...well...i call myself an artist...i guess i have to stop that after seeing what you can do! Please keep posting ...
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: The Closest Reason (working title) Chapter Two
Hey, thank you so much for taking the time to read my work and correct it! I am a horrible speller as it is...thank god for spell check! Anywho, i ...
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: What Can I
Okay, I HATE the three line's that are all "What can I/ooo etc. My friend, who helped me right the piano piece while i played it out on guitar told ...
Mar 30, 2011 -
Re: What Can I
Cold sensation takes over My lapse of judgment appears I can feel dismay’s hand on my shoulder As he walks right over to me We’re going to do everything we ...
Mar 30, 2011 -
Re: Beautiful
Hey, okay, well I’m just going to jump right in...I love it! The quote that has been debated about is correct, it doesn’t sound like it, but when I read ...
Mar 30, 2011 -
Re: Someone To Fight For
Well, I wanted to post this and have all of you read it before I flat out stated what it's about, but I’m talking about my mom and one of ...
Mar 30, 2011 -
Re: The Closest Reason (working title) Chapter Two
Two Smoke and Mirrors Are you beginning to acquire curiosity as to who I am? Well it fills me with deep regret to inform you that I am not at ...
Mar 30, 2011 -
Re: Someone To Fight For
Why thank you, i was feeling, I'm not to sure to be honest, I wrote it a while back. I found it the other day, made a few changes and ...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: Someone To Fight For
I’ll stand my ground Even after the battle Cuz that’ll make me feel stronger Even if it’s not much longer I live my life day to day In the hopes ...
Jan 28, 2011 -
Re: Dying Darkness (revised)
Wow, i really love this poem. This is up to you, seeing as it is your poem, but i can see it being longer. Extend the imagery just a bit ...
Jan 28, 2011 -
Re: Good-bye. Prologue/Ch1
Prologue Only three people knew Hayden Curnow and I were dating. Me, him, and his sister, Elizabeth, usually known as El. We wanted to keep it that way, until the ...
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: The Closest Reason (working title) Chapter One
Thank you so much for actually taking the time to read it! I am being honest when I tell you that I didn't proof read it before posting, just because ...
Dec 30, 2010 -
Re: The Closest Reason (working title) Chapter One
One Introductions “Come one Zoey what are you waiting for, we’re going to be late to the movies, and I don’t want to get a bad seat.” Zoey Carson turned ...
Dec 25, 2010
