snowberry23

Unbelievably breathe taking. This needs to be seen by more than just the YWS fabulous eyes (in my opinion!) I have never cared for the 4th of July myself, but ...

I agree with the first comment made, “Strong Stuff!” First off, let me say this, the title attracted my attention because I was born in Georgia and I love hearing ...

**Just me being silly** “Don’t leave me” seems to be the worst thing to say right now. How can I hold you back, when I love you so? I know ...

Okay, well I really like the idea and all of the metaphors you used but a lot of your ideas were unclear or out of place. For example, he committed ...

Well, I understand the message, it’s plain and very clear. I can understand, from my own experiences, what that feeling can feel like, but if I were being honest, I ...

“Could I ask you for a favor?” This type of question can be answered in a plethora of possibilities. I have heard someone reply with only one word because, to ...

Okay, well where to start. First off, excellent job, this poem really spoke to me, and I know that people can use that as a line that doesn’t really have ...

Wow, and I mean truly wow. I could easily right click to synonyms for the word wow and have knockout or sensation take this three letter word’s place but I ...

Wow--that is what writing truly is. You told a story that was almost like still photo frames for us to watch as we read. It is very hard to make ...

This was an English assignment after we finished The Things They Carried. My teacher asked us to write something that brought truth to people’s eyes, any type of truth so ...

Hey, so…not to be that kid, but I didn’t really like this. Sorry, I know that’s a bit harsh, but I have just so happened to read seventeen of Shakespeare’s ...

I loved this! The way you word things it very eclectic and i honestly love this...i read it about four times before realizing i should post to say how much ...

**Okay, so, I have no idea if this makes sense to anyone but me so please please please stab, rip, shred, and bash away at it** Thanks guys! I lie ...

Wow, I am truly in love with this poem! Let me just say that-- So I'll smile and I'll wear This fake air of indifference utterly amazed me, I am ...

As she screams “You’re heartless-a monster” “And I am a liar, but I can admit it” “What about you?” He can’t hear her Because he’s screaming to “You never cared ...