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  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: That Cruel Barb of Fate

    Well, the first thing that popped into my mind was, “I really like the unique names.” I know its set in the past in India but still; I love when ...

    Aug 22, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Untitled

    Hey! I promise I am going to read all three parts of your story I just didn’t want to leave you feeling as if I was taking for ever with ...

    Aug 22, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Pornography Kiss (chapter 1)

    Hey, SnowBerry here, thanks again for participating in my contest and I’m sorry it’s taken me so long to review this piece of work, but better late than never. First ...

    Aug 22, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Reality

    Well, I certainly liked this piece; the thing about your writing is that it reminds me a lot of my writing, well, the pieces I would never dare show anyone. ...

    Aug 22, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Cage

    Okay, wow, just wow. I typically read through peoples works, mostly poems and such, and think of a powerful word to describe their piece. This poem particularly backed my mind ...

    Aug 19, 2011
  • Other Re: If you're talking to the moon

    Well, the first word that comes to mind is brilliant, misunderstood, wonderfully executed, brilliance. I am personally a huge fan of the idea of time, and thats just what it ...

    Aug 18, 2011
  • Other Re: Knowing Me

    Aw thanks everyone! The two of you honestly just made my day. I was having a really hard night and sat down and just banged on my keys and "Knowing ...

    Aug 17, 2011
  • Other Re: Knowing Me

    Everyone knows me, but hasn't quite defined me yet. ~Time Another word for swamp. ~Quagmire I was originally grounded from stone. ~Lipstick All three of things are known to me, ...

    Aug 16, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: And so I write.

    Here I go I fell in love with this work of art after the second stanza You truly painted a picture with your words and I am... I cant even ...

    Jul 20, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Laughter

    I can see you, I am watching, As they make you drift away. And the laughter, still stings here And I slowly walk away I can feel you, no longer. ...

    Jul 14, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: No More Judging

    Wow! Amazing job, I was fixated on every word!! Here are the thoughts that ran through my head as I read every talent dripping line %uF04A Past the point of ...

    Jul 12, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Growing apart

    Well to start, let me just say I am a huge fan of the ~ (I actually don’t know the name for this symbol) Wow- I couldn’t find it on ...

    Jul 11, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: For Love

    Well, wow. This is one of the few poems I have read that has just gotten better and better as I continued reading. Now let me just state a few ...

    Jul 8, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Dancing Among Dreams

    Well, first of all, let me start off by saying welcome to the YWS  Now, down to business— I am not one to go against writing in a different ...

    Jul 8, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Stardust

    Well—I have a lot of thoughts so here we go! First: I can relate—just a bit of history to prove it ~ I have secretly been in love with my ...

    Jul 8, 2011


We understand how dangerous a mask can be. We all become what we pretend to be.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind