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Re: That Cruel Barb of Fate
Well, the first thing that popped into my mind was, “I really like the unique names.” I know its set in the past in India but still; I love when ...
Aug 22, 2011 -
Re: Untitled
Hey! I promise I am going to read all three parts of your story I just didn’t want to leave you feeling as if I was taking for ever with ...
Aug 22, 2011 -
Re: Pornography Kiss (chapter 1)
Hey, SnowBerry here, thanks again for participating in my contest and I’m sorry it’s taken me so long to review this piece of work, but better late than never. First ...
Aug 22, 2011 -
Re: Reality
Well, I certainly liked this piece; the thing about your writing is that it reminds me a lot of my writing, well, the pieces I would never dare show anyone. ...
Aug 22, 2011 -
Re: Cage
Okay, wow, just wow. I typically read through peoples works, mostly poems and such, and think of a powerful word to describe their piece. This poem particularly backed my mind ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: If you're talking to the moon
Well, the first word that comes to mind is brilliant, misunderstood, wonderfully executed, brilliance. I am personally a huge fan of the idea of time, and thats just what it ...
Aug 18, 2011 -
Re: Knowing Me
Aw thanks everyone! The two of you honestly just made my day. I was having a really hard night and sat down and just banged on my keys and "Knowing ...
Aug 17, 2011 -
Re: Knowing Me
Everyone knows me, but hasn't quite defined me yet. ~Time Another word for swamp. ~Quagmire I was originally grounded from stone. ~Lipstick All three of things are known to me, ...
Aug 16, 2011 -
Re: And so I write.
Here I go I fell in love with this work of art after the second stanza You truly painted a picture with your words and I am... I cant even ...
Jul 20, 2011 -
Re: The Laughter
I can see you, I am watching, As they make you drift away. And the laughter, still stings here And I slowly walk away I can feel you, no longer. ...
Jul 14, 2011 -
Re: No More Judging
Wow! Amazing job, I was fixated on every word!! Here are the thoughts that ran through my head as I read every talent dripping line %uF04A Past the point of ...
Jul 12, 2011 -
Re: Growing apart
Well to start, let me just say I am a huge fan of the ~ (I actually don’t know the name for this symbol) Wow- I couldn’t find it on ...
Jul 11, 2011 -
Re: For Love
Well, wow. This is one of the few poems I have read that has just gotten better and better as I continued reading. Now let me just state a few ...
Jul 8, 2011 -
Re: Dancing Among Dreams
Well, first of all, let me start off by saying welcome to the YWS Now, down to business— I am not one to go against writing in a different ...
Jul 8, 2011 -
Re: Stardust
Well—I have a lot of thoughts so here we go! First: I can relate—just a bit of history to prove it ~ I have secretly been in love with my ...
Jul 8, 2011
