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Re: deleted
Okay, first off, let me just say this is the first lyric/poetry piece that I have reviewed/read on YWS that really makes me feel like I could sing this song. ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: How Come?
Different, the first word I thought of when I started reading this piece was different. I do, however disagree with you; I truly loved this piece of work. My only ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Rain
Wow, this is something unlike I have ever seen before. I am actually a huge fan of rain. Thunder and lightning even crawled their way into my college essay. I ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Bunny Fluffy
I have no idea if this actually happened or not, and weather it did or not is regardless, there is no feeling in this piece, it is just bitter, slightly ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Delusion
Well this idea was definitely something that has been done before, but I think your poem added some really creative twists to it that I haven’t seen before, nor did ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: So they said
Let me start off by saying that I think the idea of this poem is spectacular and the way you went about writing it makes it even better. Are you ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Chilled to the core
I knew you had talent, but this, this is INCREDIBLE. If you don’t mind me asking where did you get this idea from? Anyway, let me start with my slight ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Forever with me
Okay, I have a lot to suggestion, so let me get right down to it, but before I do, I just want to say the entire idea is very amiable, ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Bathroom Walls
I just want to start of this review by saying I have been working on a poem involving cutting and I just can’t seem to get the lines right. But ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Take Me Back To 90's
Well, first of all let me just say, the 90’s were the best times of my life! I saw this and thought, I HAVE to review this. I think you ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Are you planning on purchasing the Journal?
I bought it last night!
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Ask a question here (or start a new topic!)
How did you find the pieces to put in the YWS book that just came out on amazon?
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: No Name
Well, after reading your review I couldn’t help but feel like my writing was good, but after reading this piece I have learned that your writing is extraordinary. The entire ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Reflection
“Sit down and think about what you’ve done” mama says. “Gone” that’s what daddy told her when she left, When her whole fight was brought down to one kind of ...
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: Grace
Wow, I think XxJoJoxX said it best. This is everything you need to say in four lines. If you can write something this amazing in under five lines, you will ...
Aug 22, 2011
