snowberry23

Wow, what a way to make an entrance here at YWS! Let me start off by saying I loved this poem, although, I’m sure based on the 27 likes that ...

Someone who has lost their glasses may be seeing the world a little fuzzy that day. A moment in time captured before digital photography entered the world may be unclear. ...

Wow, this is wonderful. No, not wonderful… After spending ten minutes checking through all the synonyms to that words all I can seem to say is, that piece, you piece, ...

Aw thank you so much for the helpful tips guys!

Okay… Let me start off by explaining how much I love poetry. I will sit and read George Orwell’s poetry on a Saturday night, I do have a life but ...

Okay, let me start off by informing you that I love rain. I have painted it, photographed it, written about it and most importantly, danced in it. Just so you ...

Four The Waffle House [/b] “Walter.” That was all Zoey said as she stepped through the threshold to her brother’s room. She didn’t even say it loud enough for her ...

Hey, thank you so much for the helpful posts! I just wanted to take a second to say that I have always sucked at the Your/You're thing... Also, SteppinRazor, I ...

Fine, go ahead and forget how good we are together, but you can bet that I won’t let this last forever, because we seem to connect in a way like ...

**I found this, changed the ending, and added some lines, so if I could give you a knife to stab at it I would. Have fun :P Everyone knows, the ...

Through the smoke and the rubble, Shined some light. All who experienced the awful day and night Of nine eleven can understand, We all were affected, but the time has ...

Its funny, during the massive review day we had, I kept talking about word choice and placement, and how it plays such a vital part in poetry, at least I ...

Really? What contest? Oh, and thank you for pointing that out, I always miss the little things in my work. :D I am happy you liked the story so much, ...

I would say you are very much correct; you do have a good poem here! I love when people talk about power in poetry, because to me, power is endless, ...

Okay so I really like your poem, I just can’t help but say that it’s kind of all clumped together right now. Think of your poem as someone on an ...