snowberry23

Wow I really truly honestly love it. I wish it was a tad more descriptive but overall it was great. I do believe cheesy can be a good thing and ...

Well first off, wow. Thank you so much for all your comments and helpful suggestion’s; however, there is something you should know about this piece. I wrote it for something ...

Prologue “There’s no note Zoey. She was writing that during her last few days. She was on the medication and she must have thought that she wrote it already, but ...

I lie in wait for something grand A feeling greater than this sensation Pulsing through my veins My body trembles at your fingers touch Flesh to flesh, becoming one. Your ...

I enjoyed this piece, and dare I say it, Taylor Swift would write a song about a girl like this. I felt the raw emotion and I do believe there ...

My mind didn’t fly off somewhere else while I was reading, that happens when I read my chemistry textbook, but I did get a smidge lost during the course of ...

He's screaming his lungs out, saying "i love you!" I'm moping in the corner, wishing it was true. Why didn't i realize? he hasn't been the same. I'm growing tired, ...

I agree with Deleted6 when it comes to the title, there is just a bit too much repetition, however, I do respect your use of powerful diction. The tone itself ...

Well, you definitely aren’t allotting yourself enough credit, so let me say this, you are a fantastic writer. I myself struggle with switching in and out of character when I ...

Decorous strained herself to keep her head above water, all she could see was the overpowering waves, and all she knew was her lack of ability to swim. She awoke ...