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Re: To Be a Parent
Aw thanks for the sweet review...you should write a piece based on your parents and I'll review it haha :D Keep Writing ~SnowBerry
Dec 16, 2011 -
Re: What Happened to True Love?
Ah you have to use this in creative writing some way shape or form! I want that kiss The one with the crescendo. Great opening! That happens at the end ...
Dec 16, 2011 -
Re: Winter's love.
Wow… Sorry, I was speechless for a second… But I’m back now— Okay…here we go Wow, this poem is amazing! I mean it. I read the bold first and then ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: Sea of Snow
Hey! SnowBerry here :D Your comments always make my day, so I decided that I should send a comment your way. So, Here I go— I loved this piece!!! I ...
Dec 5, 2011 -
Re: What was I supposed to do?
Rattling through my head all day, Was my lack of a chance to open my mouth and say, How could you? I’m gone for three months and this is what ...
Dec 5, 2011 -
Re: Dear Bella...
Wow, I love this poem...I am not kidding, your voice just jumped out of my laptop screen and brushed against my heart. I do have a few ideas for you, ...
Nov 30, 2011 -
Re: pavements
Wow, I have so much to say about this piece!!! first off, amazing....just amazing. I have much more to say than that so here I go :D A/N: Cheers. I ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: Atmospheric Soup
Hey there! Wow--what a poem...hold on, give me a minute to pull my mouth off the floor--Your writing was just that good. OKay--okay--enough with the compliments--let me get to the ...
Nov 22, 2011 -
Re: Blowing Flames
Hi guys. This is for PenguinAttack's contest. Reviews will be very appreciated. Thanks
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: Title has yet to be made...
I wish to find what I can’t seek, It mustn’t be the cane of Little Bo Peep. It is not round nor is it fair, But I can’t seem to ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: I Never Thought
It was never about the scars that I couldn’t seem to count, Not that you were ever worried about the exact amount. I mean, do you really not remember me, ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Disney Doodles
Wow, as someone who is currently taking AP Studio Art, I am impressed with your “doodles” :D I think everything is more than legit! Meaning, you did a really good ...
Oct 20, 2011 -
Re: Keep Your Hands off My Heart
Well, what a way to write a piece. You know, I always find it interesting when people approach any form of writing, especially poetry, in a very unique way. I ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: To Be a Parent
Daily, I question my parent’s ability to parent me. I typically ask myself, what did I do wrong? I understand that I didn’t cause my parents’ divorce, but that doesn’t ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: Crystal Clear
Thank you so much for the reviews! Sadly, my mother died six years ago, but I didnt write this to make others sad, I did it to show people that ...
Oct 13, 2011