snickerdooly

Thanks guys I'll definitely fix that stuff! -SnickerDooly

this is really good but I saw a couple mistakes and puncuation in the wrong places. Just go through and read it all and fix some of the errors. Keep ...

Yes you should post the third chapter. I don't have time right now but I'll be back to give you a review later.

"Oi, it's Shakespeare!" Hell. Ha I love how he's so sarcastic and negative! I love your story I don't believe it's to long. Off to read the second part.

I liked it. Question though when it says his green eyes where dulling and his hair was turning gray and flat does that mean he's like a old guy living ...

Awesome job! I loved it very well written keep writing awesome poems!

Thanks guys! Um because Syrus is now dead it is going to go into Evadynes point of view! I'm going to fix it up then it will be more teling ...

HAHA funny you should write more!

I loved this. It was really pretty and it flowed well. But you should go through and fix some punctuation and some parts that seem a little weird. Other than ...

I liked it, sometimes I feel this way. But I just watched the movie Temple Grandin you should look her up she is so weird but yet so... I don't ...

OH MY GOD!!!!! you are going to be the next Stephan King that was amazing! Good Job! you succeeded in keeping me up for the remainder of the night. Ha ...

I liked it a lot, but you should fix up some of the past tense stuff. I can't wait till you write more could you PM when it's posted please?

HA HA I love it! It's so funny, you definitely won the bet!

his real name is Randolph but nobody knows that yet

I Love this it's so sad and incredible. I'm trying to write a story right now where this girl is kidnapped but it's not fantasy or anything it's modern day ...