snappydog

Thanks! That's the first poem I've ever written, so it's nice to know I can do it!

A lot of editing has been done as a result of comments, and will continue to be done. Thanks to all for your help. I'm not going to post the ...

Thanks to y'all for reading and reviewing, I have now edited the manuscript so that the paragraph involving the Guilds is gone, and only the sentence explaining the job of ...

Do you mean 'have mercy?' It is a nice piece of work, reads well and very fast-paced. Just a few grammar and description points to work on. And also, what ...