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  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: You

    Really cute poem. I couldn't help but snicker at some of your word choices. I'd like to point out that the first ten stanzas I believe flowed really well, and ...

    Sep 4, 2013


Sea and Sky- both blue. Once, in proposal, Sea turned red. Sky's father- Sun forbade so she wept as rain, uniting the lovers in defiance.
— AlexWrites