smorgishborg

In complete agreement with previous posts. I like the premise (at least as I understood it) of how past demons can haunt someone in the present. I loved the wording, ...

I like it quite a bit. The imagery is great, I see no blatant errors, and it has a powerful meaning. To be frank; the only change I'd suggest is ...

I like it a lot, it is short but of course, that say nothing about the quality. A lot of times, the feeling you get from the poem is most ...

I’m on the verge of dieing. -> dying I’m stuck inside my class I want to burn the dreaded math -> Surely there are more creative means of punishment? And ...

Aside from the occasional spelling/grammar mistake, I really don't like the content. Not so much as a matter of personal preference, but from a playwriting perspective I don't find it ...