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Re: What's your Favorite Poem(s)?
The Battle Hymn of the Republic is the most remarkable bit of poetry I've ever read or heard.
Dec 23, 2008 -
Re: USA's Best President
Zachary Taylor. Duh. Nothing like military leaders who get into office, are incredibly inept, and preserve their reputations by dying before they could do more damage! *** Abraham Lincoln was ...
Dec 23, 2008 -
Re: the turtle
First of all, I need to repeat the plea that you stick to one point of view. "Careful not to slip" and then the next line "Little Turtle..." are particularly ...
Dec 23, 2008 -
Re: Who are your influences?
See, the problem is that this list is always changing. Currently, I'm trying to write fiction like Raymond Carver, poetry like Billy Collins, and my plays like John Patrick Shanley. ...
Dec 23, 2008 -
Re: He and She
Thanks for your nice comments, critiques, glowing appraisals... I've edited this a bit, with some of your suggestions, and a bit of my dissatisfaction with the fourth section. It's a ...
Dec 23, 2008 -
Re: Good writing books?
This may not apply to TLG, but if anybody hasn't read Strunk and White (The Elements of Style), it's high time you did. It's a classic for a reason. So ...
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: Good writing books?
This may not apply to TLG, but if anybody hasn't read Strunk and White ( The Elements of Style ), it's high time you did. It's a classic for a ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: He and She
He and She I’m staring at the sidewalk, watching the cracks pass below me like an escalator. My feet trudge onward, pushing up little bits of the thin snow cover ...
Dec 17, 2008 -
Re: Haiku : Mourning the loss of Spring.
I am no expert but the first and second lines are identical *** I love Basho, but I regret to say that he is as far as my knowledge regarding ...
Nov 21, 2008 -
Re: Best Speech
"Four score and seven years ago our fathers brought forth on this continent, a new nation, conceived in Liberty, and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal. ...
Nov 21, 2008 -
Re: Untitled
Tale of two poems. There's a gaping hole in the center of the poem - a critical disconnect between the first six lines and the remainder. I mean, the beginning ...
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: Should you give change to the homeless?
Save up the change and donate it to a major charity that works to prevent homelessness. In that way, you have outcome over the result, and you probably do more ...
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: Ban Gay Marriage
Courtwise, I'm talking pragmatically. I think that when causes are seen as being propped up by judicial fiat (not my own opinion) I think they lose credibility. The closeness of ...
Nov 14, 2008 -
Re: Ban Gay Marriage
But the only way the human race has ever moved is forward I guess you spoke too soon Smorgishborg :( Did I? I'm talking in a macro sense here, the ...
Nov 11, 2008 -
Re: Ban Gay Marriage
...but majority wins. Who will protect the minority against a tyranny of the majority? It's a flaw of democracy. If 51% of Americans voted that all african americans would be ...
Nov 4, 2008
