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smorgishborg

  • Poetry Discussion Re: What's your Favorite Poem(s)?

    The Battle Hymn of the Republic is the most remarkable bit of poetry I've ever read or heard.

    Dec 23, 2008
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: USA's Best President

    Zachary Taylor. Duh. Nothing like military leaders who get into office, are incredibly inept, and preserve their reputations by dying before they could do more damage! *** Abraham Lincoln was ...

    Dec 23, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: the turtle

    First of all, I need to repeat the plea that you stick to one point of view. "Careful not to slip" and then the next line "Little Turtle..." are particularly ...

    Dec 23, 2008
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Who are your influences?

    See, the problem is that this list is always changing. Currently, I'm trying to write fiction like Raymond Carver, poetry like Billy Collins, and my plays like John Patrick Shanley. ...

    Dec 23, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: He and She

    Thanks for your nice comments, critiques, glowing appraisals... I've edited this a bit, with some of your suggestions, and a bit of my dissatisfaction with the fourth section. It's a ...

    Dec 23, 2008
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Good writing books?

    This may not apply to TLG, but if anybody hasn't read Strunk and White (The Elements of Style), it's high time you did. It's a classic for a reason. So ...

    Dec 21, 2008
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Good writing books?

    This may not apply to TLG, but if anybody hasn't read Strunk and White ( The Elements of Style ), it's high time you did. It's a classic for a ...

    Dec 20, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: He and She

    He and She I’m staring at the sidewalk, watching the cracks pass below me like an escalator. My feet trudge onward, pushing up little bits of the thin snow cover ...

    Dec 17, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Haiku : Mourning the loss of Spring.

    I am no expert but the first and second lines are identical *** I love Basho, but I regret to say that he is as far as my knowledge regarding ...

    Nov 21, 2008
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Best Speech

    "Four score and seven years ago our fathers brought forth on this continent, a new nation, conceived in Liberty, and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal. ...

    Nov 21, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Untitled

    Tale of two poems. There's a gaping hole in the center of the poem - a critical disconnect between the first six lines and the remainder. I mean, the beginning ...

    Nov 15, 2008
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Should you give change to the homeless?

    Save up the change and donate it to a major charity that works to prevent homelessness. In that way, you have outcome over the result, and you probably do more ...

    Nov 15, 2008
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Ban Gay Marriage

    Courtwise, I'm talking pragmatically. I think that when causes are seen as being propped up by judicial fiat (not my own opinion) I think they lose credibility. The closeness of ...

    Nov 14, 2008
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Ban Gay Marriage

    But the only way the human race has ever moved is forward I guess you spoke too soon Smorgishborg :( Did I? I'm talking in a macro sense here, the ...

    Nov 11, 2008
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Ban Gay Marriage

    ...but majority wins. Who will protect the minority against a tyranny of the majority? It's a flaw of democracy. If 51% of Americans voted that all african americans would be ...

    Nov 4, 2008


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