smorgishborg

Lo and behold! It still applies! 12. Write a miserably emo poem, and then make sure to tell all your reviewers that: "It has real emotion", or "I was really ...

Strong imagery! You're hallmark seems to be this type of vivid illustration, but this may be the finest I've seen of yours. My complaints are only nit-picks. - ...drove away ...

That just floored me. The whole thing. I'm speechless. there is a difference between ww2 and modern times, in ww2 we were the only ones to have them and so ...

Well, I haven't been really writing much lately, a fact which I attribute to my natural sloth, as well as the fact that I'm generally busy. I'm trying to take ...

It bogs down. It really really does. Two things: This could be 1/4th the length. The imagery or language wasn't really redundant, but... it was. So was the idea and ...

Should countries have nuclear weapons? No. (exception going to the Duchy of Grand Fenwick) Will countries have nuclear weapons in the future? Uh...... duh?

Sometimes, what not to do is just as helpful. Draw your own conclusions, but all I see is that actually describing the scene... gets you in trouble. Literary Review's Bad ...

*sigh* Galatea, the thing is, the terrorists don't fall under the Geneva Convention. We are not bound to follow those regulations in regard to terrorists since they don't fall under ...

Paul: How are you? Rosie: I'm ok Great example. Know why? Because of this: Rosie: I ' m ok. A contraction! Please write dialogue the way it would sound if ...

What I seem to be reading, and what worries me a bit, is that hunting is all about POWER It's the power of life and death, the power of knowing ...

Well now, lets see how nitpicky I can be. - The station should be in Manhattan. The subways aren't as full nor as prevenlent in the Bronx. - Remeber to ...

Well, I can't vote until the useless 2009 elections, and it kills me that my sister and I will get to vote in our first presidential elections at the same ...

I was in New York today. Big squash tournament in Grand Central. But thats neither here nor there.

*shakes head* a thriller story i wrote. it isnt finished yet but id appreciate your comments. there are a few grammer mistakes but if you could find it in your ...

We've taken over your story. You are now in.... the Twilight Zone ... Which is what your story reminded me of. Your story suffers from a lack of characterization. It ...