smorgishborg

Thanks so much for the critiques! - I wonder, rereading some of the responses if some people didn't pick up on this ? Gahks, I added the dash because Dickinson ...

I wrote this in English class, surrounded by Ralph Waldo Emerson, Walt Whitman, and Emily Dickenson... Trail Mix 1. He complained of the mosquitoes, Over ridges, Under trees, "Why hike," ...

Lil_Pau, I find it hard to disagree With any limerick I see And while your attempt is commendable It is slightly reprehensible That it ends so violently

Nate, I have a sneaking suspicion that we might not find common ground on this... :smt064 "Qualities like "Leadership", "People skills", and "Intelligence" come to mind. " How does one ...

But I don't think you understood my post. Adding an 'etc' would not cure the criticisms I made. Indeed, it would presumably include the very reasons you do not think ...

Nate, perhaps I should have included an "ect." my list was meant as an example not all inclusive. Incan, It's also true that other people have a right to dislike ...

To me, I'm afraid, it didn't have much to offer. There is real poetry in the flight and movements of birds, but you made no attempt to tap into this. ...

You're really not going to get feedback on this I'm afraid. Before anyone is going to really seriously review this, you need to reformat and proofread this. You need spaces ...

The following are sound reasons to base your vote on: - How they would manage foreign policy - How they would manage the economy - How they would protect the ...

Reko Black, You have a right to ignore your critiques, but you do so at your peril. This website is remarkable for the plethora of honest and accurate critiques available ...

Your rhyming isn't helping you, it's forced and often awkward. Anything in orange is a line that you ought to think over and replace. Either it's a forced line, or ...

I really shouldn't step into this again, but when I see something this factually incorrect... I believe that each of the members of the axis of evil are dictatorships, not ...

Apologies for the wait. This week was a busy one.

Known for being from Neverland...

For Cal's Colorful Contest . This is based on picture #4. Later edited for Creative Writing class *** Green Tinted Goggles Wilson threw open the cabinet and stared dimly at ...