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smorgishborg

  • Other Re: Flowers for the Wake - My Play, Live!

    I thought you had forgotten! Well done, once again... It really helps to read the play as you watch though, you do get all the lines. The other unfortunate thing ...

    May 23, 2008
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Swearing In Stories

    For the record, David Mamet completely disagrees with me. But, from a theatrical perspective, swearing should always be kept to a minimum. When you're writing something that people will hear ...

    May 23, 2008
  • Novel Workshop Re: Invasion of the Penis Snatchers

    All events in this play are derived from real events which occurred in Kinshasa, Democratic Republic of the Congo on April 22nd. They were reported by Reuters, which inspired this ...

    May 22, 2008
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Sci Fi

    Here's what really bugs me. "I wrote this when I was bored, my first attempt at Sci-Fi". What are your trying to accomplish with a subtitle like that? Why post ...

    May 22, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Round the Bend

    Really fascinating story, I loved the bit of history at the beginning, but the story was even better... Solid story telling from the opening line which had a certain poetry ...

    May 22, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Questions Arise! (edit)

    Indeed questions arise! I question your haphazard use of exclamation points! See, I'm disappointed by this poem, because you seem incapable of going deep at all into the deepest subject ...

    May 22, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Bridezillas

    While there's nothing strictly wrong with it, it doesn't score very high in the originality and "profound observation" departments. - I think for a poem which is written to be ...

    May 22, 2008
  • Novel Workshop Re: Honor

    Huzzah! Huzzah! Huzzah!

    Apr 5, 2008
  • Scripts Re: Trick or Treat?

    Its a solid script, and errors didn't impede comprehension so I'm going to ignore them. Dialogue : It makes me happy that your school teaches scriptwriting! I think they're doing ...

    Apr 5, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Trail Mix

    3. There's a bed of moss Soft as feathers Which lies Two ravines and Three Hills From an overgrown trail That meanders back To the Junction Where it meets the ...

    Apr 5, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A Night At The Movies (April Fools!)

    The lights of the movie theater were stunning! People came from all around, like moths to a flame, every night when the whole building burst to life with color. White ...

    Apr 1, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Some other time honey (April Fools!)

    As I leaned in to kiss Her voluptuous lips, Which were as red as Lobsters, having been Plucked from the Maine water And into the boiling water Which bubbled and ...

    Apr 1, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Tibet... perhaps you've heard!

    New York Times Radio Free Asia National Public Radio Guardian - UK The Economist And for comic relief... Xinhua ... points to anyone who can even find their story.* By ...

    Mar 15, 2008
  • Scripts Re: Bluebeard

    He closes the door silently and leans back on it, looking [s]passed[/s] past the camera at something inside the room. Very nice, you have a lovely image in your mind ...

    Mar 11, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Bush Vetoes Bill Outlawing CIA Waterboarding

    Vernon, People do not intrinsically possess (self-evident) rights. They are rights legislated by governing bodies, and when those bodies fail to protect those rights, it becomes quite clear that they ...

    Mar 11, 2008


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