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As promised... [spoiler]The Rerun By Josh Harris Cast Jessica-The Star Megan-The Brat Max-The Lover James-The killer Sue-The Granny Jane-The Director Producer-The Producer Info Jane, a crazy That does

Don't know why I didn't put it in a spoiler, but go figure. This is only part one, I don't have more time today, but [s]tomorrow[/s] sometime when I'm not ...

Well, you don't say anything about not doing scripts, so... Please don't kill yourself with punctuation and grammar. I'd love character impressions, dialogue complaints, and plot holes! Invasion of th

First things first. Italicize your stage directions so we can pick them out, and try to put your character's names in bold or CAPS. Now, on to the play: [spoiler]The ...

On to part II - I'm keeping the paragraph format I. First sentence: I had never truly lost anyone close before. Second sentence: As if any man can control the ...

The angst is gone? My dark shadows are suddenly fleeting fleeing my sunrise my dearest friends gone to run away like vampires from the piercing light! I guess, I ought ...

I know some of you out there might be just a tad depressed about the certain failure to qualify of a certain highly regarded team... but that's no reason to ...

Eh, this never really stood out, but you squandered what promise it did have fairly shortly. It wasn't an exercise in incompetence, no you seem to be fairly adept at ...

Raimunda, A simple check of the previous posts on this page would have revealed the way this thread works. You don't get critiques by directing people to your work. Nor ...

Hey... you stole my idea of repeating the first line of the poem in every stanza. =P Good one. I don't think that the repetition helps this at all, because ...

Jack Kerouac, ladies and gentlemen. *** There were parts of this that were fantastic, and parts that were complete garbage. I loved and hated this thing, which means that nobody ...

There's really nothing compelling behind this poem, nothing that stands out for topical or literary acclaim. It never grabs like it should, it never takes you anywhere. It's been done, ...

- What I have to say about this. - My photographs (only the best ones) - My dance - The Dalai Lama's peace plan, which the Chinese denounce as "splitist" ...

As an answer to your points, I direct you to this site: I'm sure all of these thing are true. But I want to know what they aren't reporting. Give ...

I enjoyed it, not so much for any dazzling literary merit, but more for the sheer audacity of this. It flaunts a lot of the pretentiousness and sentimentality that we ...