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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: Mother Earth

    Sorry for the late reply, been busy the past couple of days... Thanks for the review! The crow imagery is sort of the idea that humans are like crows, abusing ...

    Nov 23, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: Mother Earth

    Yes, that was indeed the effect I intended; to display the fact that we all leech of earth for temporary gain, but will soon realize that the only reason we ...

    Nov 20, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: Mother Earth

    Thank you very much for the great review. I really appreciate any support I can get! :)

    Nov 20, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: Mother Earth

    Thank you very much for taking a look!

    Nov 20, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: how to treat a case of powdery mildew

    yup, I can confirm this is what I meant, but you are like 1000x better at writing reviews than I am. so you can literally just scratch my review and ...

    Nov 20, 2020
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Where're we going?

    XD thats a bad onee haha

    Nov 20, 2020
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Where're we going?

    XDXD MY MOM ALWAYS USED TO SAY 'THE MOON, TO VISIT MY GRANDMA' (her grandma is dead obv) IDK IF THATS MORBID BUT-

    Nov 20, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: Mother Earth

    thanks for reading

    Nov 20, 2020
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Where're we going?

    cute little poem

    Nov 20, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: If I Hear Another Christmas Song...

    I swear, everyone has their Christmas trees up in like October. So I can definitely share that sentiment. Everyone's already decorated, and I haven't even started. But anyways, I like ...

    Nov 19, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Girl with the Dark Wavy Hair

    Okay, it makes a lot more sense now. Honestly, if I added any more criticisms it'd just be looking for things to criticize. This work is really amazing! Props to ...

    Nov 19, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Lament

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    Lament is a simple yet profound poem with a fitting name. Let me say that I think you mastered the ability to use description in this poem. I'm not quite ...

    Nov 19, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Lament

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    Nov 19, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Girl with the Dark Wavy Hair

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    I don't have much to say other than I really liked this poem. It is a simple, affectionate, and heart-warming poem of emotion. I think this properly captures that feeling ...

    Nov 19, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Historical Fiction Re: Silent Sakura - Chapter 1

    haha thanks :)

    Nov 19, 2020


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