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Re: how to save a life: start of something different
:D this has nothing to do what I already wrote. this is different story CHAPTER 1: SOMEONE HAS TO DO IT Mrs. Marin opened the purple curtains and cried "Rise ...
Jun 12, 2007 -
Re: how to save a life: under pressure
"Since no one was hurt, can you please sign thes relase?" asked Sam to Jake Fray's parents. "It was your fault." yelled Mrs. Fray. " Well he could've...." yelled Mr. ...
Jun 11, 2007 -
Re: Barbie Roberts Mystery Files
really good. Can't wait to see the rest of the story.
May 17, 2007 -
Re: To Face the Flames
your story is really good. Is Jack Kyle's stepbrother? My critique is explain Jack more. Other than that, your story has a good plot and you are good on writing ...
May 12, 2007