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Re: A long time ago I was a dreamy girl
Thank you Sugarchica glad that you like it :)
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Re: A long time ago I was a dreamy girl
Thank you Bella :) I'm glad that you enjoyed reading my text the way it was not a school essay . I was feeling that , so I've tried to ...
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Re: The city that tells our stories
It is a city, a small one. It is the city of our birth if not the city of our childhood and adolescence. We used to see it as a ...
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Re: A Bitter Beauty
Hey! I love you poem is great ,but what I like the most is the end talks about a deep regret . some times even the beauty can't have a ...
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Re: The price of living
Hi:) I liked your poem .the idea is good .what I like the most is the conversation between you an death is so fantastic . I wish you good luck ...
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Re: Innocence
Hi :) I really enjoyed reading your poem .I like how you expressed weakness by saying: "innocence taken from a little girl's heart",and how you made us feel that you ...
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Re: Lies
Hi there I liked your poem , the description of the feelings that you are looking for and how the end was .I really enjoyed reading your poem is so ...
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Re: My Soul Mate
I agree with the others it is so good because of the honest feelings and the description of pain .But, what I like the most is the losing control in ...
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Re: A long time ago I was a dreamy girl
The dream is a strong word. It is the power of changing each simple detail according to our wishes and hopes. The dream is a simple word, but with a ...
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Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hi everyone I'am a new member in your great society . My name is Samah . I'am from Morocco & I love to write because I feel like giving the ...
Dec 14, 2010
