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Thank you Beth :) i really appreciate your comments and I'm glad you like the story. yeah now that you've brought it to my attention that line does sound a ...

Hello Isitlove :) thank you so much for your help :) i'm writing another chapter now, i just want to see the reaction to this one before i continued. don't ...

thankyou So much anchor. again you have been really helpful :)

i love the opening to this section. I have looked at doing a part of a story like this but i love the sincerity of the character Cole :)

hello neon writer :) the book is written from the point of view of Lori Nickel, the youngest, yet most intelligent member of teen spy. I just wished to clarify ...

this is great. I think it everyone has had something from this poem but mixing them all together gives it a different take, and you feel a lot of sympathy ...

I love how descriptive this work is and it really gives you an insight into the character of Juliet. But maybe you could make the story more clear in the ...

anchor :) no i don't take any offense. the first chapter needs work and that's why i uploaded that one because the plot unfolds after but i needed to sort ...