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hello neon writer :) the book is written from the point of view of Lori Nickel, the youngest, yet most intelligent member of teen spy. I just wished to clarify ...

This is a good story and i understand the fact that it is a short story and obviously i fits the scene, but it can be a little hard to ...

I have taken all comments on board from the last version of this which i posted and revised it while adding in the plot too:) i hope you like it ...

It's a good poem, with a good rhyme scheme but i think that it can come across a little muddled. No, I lost my balance, i think that this line ...

this is a beautiful poem i especially like the parts where you talk about your hands never moving. m y hands still, without fight. And never again will they stir ...

this is great. I think it everyone has had something from this poem but mixing them all together gives it a different take, and you feel a lot of sympathy ...

I love how descriptive this work is and it really gives you an insight into the character of Juliet. But maybe you could make the story more clear in the ...

I love this poem. It sums everything about being lonely :) and is really genuine. I think if expanded on it a little it would be amazing :D

anchor :) no i don't take any offense. the first chapter needs work and that's why i uploaded that one because the plot unfolds after but i needed to sort ...

Screw love screw hate, Stuff destiny, stuff fate, In this world we are alone, The things we do, And the doors we pass through, Lead us to the final promise. ...