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Hey, i'm not gonna lie i have only read this chapter i have never read any of your other work but i decided to read soemthing new for me and ...

i love this it's so deep :) i love the fact that the poem is written in a convosation “It’s cracking love, just like my heart.” I think this line ...

Hello again all, this chapter is from the view of the notoriously ditzy Soleil Corona but the point of the chapter is to give some more depth and also this ...

Hello Again :) i want to start by saying sorry that it's took me so long to read this but i'm here now and late is better then never. I ...

Hi again all. I have tried to give Avani's chapter a more informal tone to it, to make the character warmer. It's quite long this chapter, but stick with it, ...

I really like this chapter. It build suspense better then the other two chapter's and though, at first it was a little bit hard to follow, the idea of suspense ...

This chapter is taken from the view of Camden Brush the personification of air. Please read chapter 1 & 2 first if you get lost. Be honest in your reviews, ...

I like the initial idea but maybe there needs to be a little bit more substance. It's only the first chapter and it's left open, as though you don't actually ...

Hello, I'm going to start by saying I'm reviewing this from my phone so just post on my wall if my writing gets hideous and ill repost it on your ...

Hey me again :) I'm reviewing the second chapter now :) Today is exactly one year, six months and two weeks that I’ve been in a coma. - i like ...

The opening of this book is so gripping i love it :) I am going to start by saying that i am sorry i didn't read this yesterday i just ...

I love how this poem makes the reader feel trapped in the scene. It's a really good poem but sometimes i think the point can be a little bit lost. ...

i love the warning in this poem :) i also like that you have gone against what most teenagers would usually write about and made something religious and seemingly 'uncool' ...

this is a good emotional poem but i would look at the rhyme scheme to improve it. The first stanza has the same rhyme through and that gives it a ...

wow! that is so dramatic it's brilliant! i love the way the plot is let out the bag at the end and reader is left asking why? I think that ...