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Re: A Jonas Love Story
A Jonas Love Story Introduction The story starts at the beginning of summer vacation. Isabella, Hailey, and Gabriella are three girls that live in New Jersey. They are best friends ...
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Re: Prologue of my story
I love all the adjectives you added in here. This is probably one of the best prologues I've read. You give a lot of details, but not too much that ...
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Re: nvm 5
I really liked this story. You had some really good lines in here. Just a few spelling errors, and that's it! But really, this blew me away. I could feel ...
Jan 6, 2009
