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Re: So Untouched Part Three
I clutched onto my stomach as lay on my bed. The obnoxious butterflies in my stomach wouldn't let me forget that boy I saw earlier that day. The music that ...
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Re: I care
He whispered in her hair Like an angel in the air Fully conscious of the events that led His thoughts fused in her head Caught up in the moment Not ...
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Re: Wolf Moon- Prolouge
I would first like to say that this was amazing. I loved it. Your a talented writer. You had be going the entire time! I loved how you tied everything ...
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Re: Sweet Little Felicity
That's when I knew that he was the one I could tell my secret to. I opened the door wider, inviting him in and told him. Told him about Tony ...
Jan 8, 2009 -
Re: So Untouched Part Two
Thanks so everyone who reviewed my last entry! I will enter a revised one later, but now I have so many ideas in my head that I have to get ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Tissue For Your Tears?
This is for Princess's and Demeter's old-fashioned poetry contest. It has to be about a random object so I'm gonna choose *cue dramatic horror movie music* a tissue. I caress ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: A Jonas Love Story
A Jonas Love Story Introduction The story starts at the beginning of summer vacation. Isabella, Hailey, and Gabriella are three girls that live in New Jersey. They are best friends ...
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Re: A Jonas Love Story
A Jonas Love Story Introduction The story starts at the beginning of summer vacation. Isabella, Hailey, and Gabriella are three girls that live in New Jersey. They are best friends ...
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Re: Prologue of my story
I love all the adjectives you added in here. This is probably one of the best prologues I've read. You give a lot of details, but not too much that ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: nvm 5
I really liked this story. You had some really good lines in here. Just a few spelling errors, and that's it! But really, this blew me away. I could feel ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: So Untouched
Woah, intro. This is the first story that I have ever done on this. There are no vampires, no princes, no dark angels. This is raw and real. Sorry no ...
Jan 3, 2009
