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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Present Tense

    Wow. I'm kind of stunned this hasn't garnered any comments yet — it's so gorgeously written. There are lots of punctuation errors — unclosed quotation marks, commas, em dashes written ...

    Jan 27, 2006


One by one they went / And, though each laughed as he returned to earth / Their souls were in their eyes.
— Alfred Noyes (Watchers of the Sky)