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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Other Re: Jonathon Six (Chapter One, Part One)

    Thank you very much for reviewing this for me. Your feedback was really very appreciated, and I'm glad that you didn't totally bash me. It was really good advice and ...

    Sep 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: This, My Excavation

    Very cool! I love Bon Iver, so props for writing a poem on that, and the poem itself had me completely enthralled. Nice work! My favorite line was that last ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Other Re: Jonathon Six (Chapter One, Part One)

    Thanks! I realized a few of those mistakes as I wrote them, but I couldn't seem to figure out how to make them sound more natural. And you are right--it ...

    Sep 24, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Other Re: Jonathon Six (Chapter One, Part One)

    Thank you so much! You have no idea what this means to me. I have wanted to be an author since before I could even write proper sentences, and the ...

    Sep 23, 2013


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