Young Writers Society

Hey! Smanske15 here to review! Note: These critiques are constructive criticism only. They are not meant to be mean or hurtful, only helpful. Take these with a grain of salt. ...

Smanske15 here to review! Note: These nit-picks are constructive criticism only. In no way are they meant to be hurtful or degrading. Take them with a grain of salt. Overall, ...

Hey! I, personally, am not a huge fan of the abstract. That being said, I did really like your piece. I think it had a nice flow and rhythm to ...

Hey! Smanske15 here to review! A few quick comments. Keep in mind, please, that these are merely suggestions and I in no way intend to influence your art. Stay creative! ...

Hey! Smanske15 here to review! First off, these are merely suggestions, and I in no way expect you to use them, but they're here if you want. Here are the ...

Hey! I really liked your poem. It's really fun to read when there's an actual story beneath the poem, you know? I wasn't expecting it to turn so dark, but ...

Hey!! I liked your poem. It describes something that should be simple, but is so complicated that we don't even know what to call it when we feel it. I ...

Hey! First off, I am very impressed. You included many elements that I liked, and many others that made me want to read more. My first complaint is that you ...

Hey! I LOVED it. You're definitely not afraid to break the third wall, which is also something I tend to do when writing in first person. You had a couple ...

Hey! First off, nice. The storyline was spot on. I do want to warn you that there are a few grammatical errors, but I hate it when people point mine ...

Hey! Upon the first look, I noticed a few grammatical errors, but I won't comment on them specifically because I hate when people do that to me. I just wanted ...

Hey! My favorite line was the last two: "I knew you only once and thought of you today." I thought it was beautifully phrased, and elegant in the way of ...

Hey! I like the twist on a modern idea. It was a little deranged, but since it's from the alien's perspective I'll accept it. You wrote your poem in standard ...

Hey! Smanske15 here I liked the storyline. I think that you could have gone more into the story, because I was left with questions such as what happened after Freddie ...

This poem is utterly beautiful. Honestly, most poems I read that spell something down the side, for lack of a better word, suck. But this one you had clearly put ...