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slytherin7

  • Lyrics Re: Mr Harry Potter, sir

    Awwh!! I love this song Your cool ginger friend and the girl so nerdy stayed with you til the end (sorry about your birdie!) Loved this cause you didn't forget ...

    Dec 18, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Winter's love.

    I know you're hearing this for the millionth time but this poem is simply breathtaking. No one can exaggerate the amount of talent you have and how amazing this poem ...

    Dec 16, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: It starts with screamo

    Hi Zombie. I agree this poem has a few flaws but I'll fix them later. I understand how you mean with the line my nose smells but since I already ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: It starts with screamo

    Hey amygabb. Thankyou so much for commenting on my poem. I agree on the word ripe now that you mention it, but I couldn't really think of a better word. ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: It starts with screamo

    I can't help it. I just melt. It controls me, defines who I am, makes things clear. All the sounds converge. The melody is everywhere and recklessly perfect. When I'm ...

    Dec 7, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Bending Flower

    This poem is so good. I love the hope and encouragement it's about. I think everyone feels like that at some point in their life. I love the use of ...

    Dec 7, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Push

    This poem is amazing. Keep writing :)

    Dec 7, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Crystal Clear

    Heaps good poem. Your words are very well used. Love it! Keep writing :)

    Dec 7, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: My love is like/as a Punk

    This was really good. I love how you used band names. I don't know most of them but I still like it. I think your only fault is the very ...

    Dec 7, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Whoredom

    Wow. That was so sad. You're amazing at poetry. I've never reviewed before so yeah. This poem was pretty much perfect to me. I loved it and I can feel ...

    Dec 7, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: You Drove Me Insane

    Wow. thankyou so much for your reviews. I can't believe how impressed you all were. Honestly, i didn't think i was that good. I'll be submitting more soon. xo

    Dec 6, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: You Drove Me Insane

    Unrequited love is always the worst Other girls seemed to get in first I sat too shy to even say hi You walked over when we were nine I was ...

    Dec 1, 2011


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