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Re: Mr Harry Potter, sir
Awwh!! I love this song Your cool ginger friend and the girl so nerdy stayed with you til the end (sorry about your birdie!) Loved this cause you didn't forget ...
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: Winter's love.
I know you're hearing this for the millionth time but this poem is simply breathtaking. No one can exaggerate the amount of talent you have and how amazing this poem ...
Dec 16, 2011 -
Re: It starts with screamo
Hi Zombie. I agree this poem has a few flaws but I'll fix them later. I understand how you mean with the line my nose smells but since I already ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: It starts with screamo
Hey amygabb. Thankyou so much for commenting on my poem. I agree on the word ripe now that you mention it, but I couldn't really think of a better word. ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: It starts with screamo
I can't help it. I just melt. It controls me, defines who I am, makes things clear. All the sounds converge. The melody is everywhere and recklessly perfect. When I'm ...
Dec 7, 2011 -
Re: Bending Flower
This poem is so good. I love the hope and encouragement it's about. I think everyone feels like that at some point in their life. I love the use of ...
Dec 7, 2011 -
Re: Push
This poem is amazing. Keep writing :)
Dec 7, 2011 -
Re: Crystal Clear
Heaps good poem. Your words are very well used. Love it! Keep writing :)
Dec 7, 2011 -
Re: My love is like/as a Punk
This was really good. I love how you used band names. I don't know most of them but I still like it. I think your only fault is the very ...
Dec 7, 2011 -
Re: Whoredom
Wow. That was so sad. You're amazing at poetry. I've never reviewed before so yeah. This poem was pretty much perfect to me. I loved it and I can feel ...
Dec 7, 2011 -
Re: You Drove Me Insane
Wow. thankyou so much for your reviews. I can't believe how impressed you all were. Honestly, i didn't think i was that good. I'll be submitting more soon. xo
Dec 6, 2011 -
Re: You Drove Me Insane
Unrequited love is always the worst Other girls seemed to get in first I sat too shy to even say hi You walked over when we were nine I was ...
Dec 1, 2011
