sleepthief

The short version of this story. An entry for jaetwee's contest The Beginning of the End. 250 words maximum, ending with the same word you began with. I wrote the ...

A FEW NOTES: This is the extended version for jaetwee's contest The Beginning of the End . Had to be 250 words exactly and end with the same word it ...

It would be great if we could get everyone to reply to this and thank Nate. :) Thanks a bunch, Nate. You're awesome.

Hey. :) Oh, what a beautiful poem. The style reminds me of Cummings (one of my favorite poets), the way your words are combinations of unexpected words. This whole poem ...

Hey. :) Let me set your mind at ease and say that you did very well on this haiku. You followed all the rules. You had five syllables on the ...

There he goes my beautiful world where every bit of him is real is tangible is mine where his laugh is like a thunderclap and signals the coming of rain ...

scrape the shavings of my heart from under your fingernails, you clawed from the inside of your car And sing the ABCs while you wash your soul, you sobered when ...

dear heart, it's summer and green in the garden the rose stem hangs (drooping, and darling, why is that?) from between Your grimace petals (velvet never knew Your lips) the ...

Hello, GryphonFledgling. I'm sleepthief. I think we've met, in the virtual sense, of course. And I think that this wasn't reviewed for four days because it's just so dang perfect. ...

Hi, futrauthr482! (Got a nickname? :) ) I'm sleepthief, and welcome to YWS! I'm fairly new myself. Um, I would love to review all of this, like, it would make ...

Hello, I'm sleepthief, and I'm fairly new so I'm still working out a reviewing system, but so far anything I add will be in bold and any comments I have ...

He watched her letter burn in the darkness. Smoke wafted into the air, signaling to the world his crime. So he closed his eyes. The black canvas of his eyelids ...

Thanks Griffinkeeper, Heather, and Lilymoore! You all are so nice. I never expected an online community to be this welcoming. :) Griffinkeeper: No, I haven't yet posted anything, but I'm ...

Hi, everyone. I'm sleepthief, and I'm new. I've been a member for about a month but I just barely discovered this forum and so I thought I should formally introduce ...

Hi. :) I was drawn to this by the compelling title. I enjoyed reading this poem. The hardest battle to win are the ones , when you feel heartless towards ...