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I'm a bit rusty with my grammar but I'm practicing. I hope you enjoy reading this. It is a cold and windy day. I sat staring out the window of ...

You are not alone Crysi. I was 11 and in the sixth grade. I was also at school that day and I remember a student of another grade come in, ...

Nice. I'm not very good at analysing poems but this one is well-written. This is my favourite part in the poem, What do you hear With ears deafened- you’re dead ...

The story is great! I enjoyed it. When I was reading I was thinking it should obviously have hurt to have a heavy weight tugging at her hair. I smiled ...

It angers that humans can destroy such beautiful, splendid tranquility. All for what? So that they can congratulate themselves at being masters of the universe? This is an excellent poem. ...

What a beautiful poem. It's so romantic. If only the rest of the world would allow themselves to feel love and realise again the importance of marriage. I hope life ...

You're right, not all songs should be happy ones. I felt what you were saying. I placed myself in a guy's perspective and imagined myself losing the girl I loved. ...

I'm no good at giving constructive criticism for I don't know what to say really, what can I say that might help you? I do have this to say though. ...

Hey congrats Demoness! :)

I can relate with this: I want to be better now, I want to be real now This simple line brought tears to my eyes. Your poem is beautiful.

I sometimes forget the ways of expressing myself. I sometimes find myself wishing I could move like a ballerina or fly through the air like a bboy. Dancing is a ...

Wow. Incredible. Your poem is filled with emotion and your voice is heard. There is a sadness within the words. This girl is lost and cries out for help but ...

You have me longing for a forbidden love too. I liked, no loved your poem. You're a natural :).

The sun can be cruel As it can be soothing After a life of being captivated in a cell Wasting away Hoping to pray of a Life that could’ve been ...

Wow... I'm speechless. Very profound and very awe inspiring.