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This student made it into college? Wow they'll take anyone these days. I have a hard time believing anyone could possibly be moved even a metaphorical fraction of a fraction ...

Jesus visits Wall Street. And boy is he in for a suprise: [Verse 1] Woe to the rich man, but I guess that's not how it went down. Here everybody ...

I can see this discussion has turned into what role religion plays and what role science plays in society so here's my two cents. A world without any religion would ...

Stephen Hawkings says that if an advanced alien species superior to us were to meet us, they would most likely be hostile. They would probably abduct us for whatever medical ...

I have to say this is very good. I disagree with Heart's idea that it should have a rhyme scheme. This seems like its meant to be a narrative poem. ...

One major problem with this is that it doesn't have a consistent rhyme scheme. Maybe that's purposeful but it gets kind of annoying. At least to me. Labeling choruses, verses, ...

American Jesus Part 1:Descendence to the human world Instrumental acoustic guitar riff American Jesus Part 2:Walking on Ice [Verse 1] I feel the cold around me. Patterns different the snowflakes ...

I like the basic message of the poem which is don't change who you are to become more famous and stuff like that. I would advise trying to use more ...

The premise to this story is very dry. So a girl randomly drowns (no explanation is given. why didn't the girl cry for help?) and lost with her life is ...

If that's what you got out of it that's what you got out of it. I know why I wrote it but to tell you how to interpret something is ...

Hey guys thanks for the reviews. I use lots of sky imagery in this poem so that could explain alot of the strange word choices. Wren is a type of ...

Such is life of all teenagers. The tone clearly shows the narrators ambivalence on her(?) true identity, something that every kid experiences. I'd like more imagery. When I write poetry ...

Eroding away the light, Overwhelming voids of blight, Illumination oh so bright, contingency on rainy night. Life ascending, Amorphous Cirrus, The sky is crying, Birds keep flying. Thunder reverberati

I like it. Perhaps because its similar to how I'm feeling? Not sure if that's a good thing D:. The repetition gets annoying sometimes but it's not unbearable. I feel ...

Thanks for the review guys! Storm if you read the description (which doesn't appear on the actual post so I can understand why you said that) I describe this poem ...