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  • Other Re: Why am I a Christian?

    *sigh*....I really hate these pieces...I really do. For two reasons. One they generally use EXTREMELY simple language and require EXTREMELY little thought to write. Second it implies that Christians a

    Jun 1, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Rainy Day

    This poem is really good. There are parts of the poem where it is a little repetitive such as It is raining Steady and consistent I am alone Safe and ...

    May 29, 2011
  • General Articles Re: The gay guy in the bar

    *sigh* attacking cursing. you know what cursing adds to a piece? nothing :3 you know what it takes away? nothing :3 And also this essay was not meant to be ...

    May 22, 2011
  • General Articles Re: The gay guy in the bar

    Great now move on to what I actually said :3

    May 22, 2011
  • General Articles Re: The gay guy in the bar

    You are in a bar. Enjoying a good beer. All the sudden you hear some commotion in the front of the bar. You look over to see a man being ...

    May 22, 2011
  • Other Re: Romeo & Juliet: Instant Messaging Edition

    This is really cool! I never liked romeo and juliet, thought it was probably the most overrated piece of literature out there, but this IM edition makes it sound really ...

    May 22, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: First kiss

    This is really sad :( You use really good descriptive words to describe the kiss and the ending is just depressing (in a good way?: kinda. i don't know). Never ...

    May 18, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Origins of Fantasy Chpt 2

    May 4, 1857, London Oliver Dewitt You have got to be kidding me. The noble's rapier swung wildly without aim. The boy dodged another predictable slash. How did this bafoon ...

    May 10, 2011
  • General Articles Re: Why are we here?

    Chelseam before I answer your questions I'd just like to say I'm glad my essay made you think. Same goes to you lovethelifeulive That was the whole point. However to ...

    May 8, 2011
  • General Articles Re: Why are we here?

    Imagine a grain of sand. What did you see? Obviously you didn't see just one grain of sand. You saw billions upon billions of grains sand in a beach. Now ...

    May 6, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Because I'm a Christian

    *sigh* guess im going to have to be the lone party pooper. First of all Christians in America have no place in saying that they're being discriminated against. Unless you ...

    May 5, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Origins of Fantasy prequel+Chpt 1

    thanks tear drop! haha yeah my grammar sucks .__. so thanks for pointing out my mistakes. other than that i've purposely started the novel out slow. I guess I could've ...

    Apr 23, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Origins of Fantasy prequel+Chpt 1

    Hey guys. this is a prequel to a novel that i hope one day to actually write (sad face?). I'm a final fantasy fan so i think it'd be interesting ...

    Apr 23, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Figure Skating

    very good story. i guess it sorta shows the struggles that teenagers go to when they get discouraged? sorta? haha whatev. but i know how this girl feels. in band ...

    Apr 22, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Never succumb

    Meh...I have to admit. I don''t really like it that much. The syntax is unfavorable (at least to me) and just the whole general plotline of the entire story is ...

    Apr 20, 2011


When a flower doesn't bloom, you fix the environment in which it grows, not the flower.
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