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Thanks guys! I'll remember these tips for next time! Well, now I have to lock this one, so people with new works get reviewed, Ok? :pirate2: Woo, new smilies!

This story is very Pytonesque and funny. The problem is that there are spelling mistakes and Grammatical mistakes through out. Editing will solve this problem.

That poem is so sweet! The sylable pattern is perfect for it and the message was quite clear. Well done!

This is absolutly correct! High school is built up like 19th century England! This is the most apparent in British schools where it actually goes by how much money you ...

This is so true. We write for control over something and if you are skillful enough, you can do it. There isn't much to review here, but the best poems ...

This could go somewhere, if you think about it. The dialogue could use a little brush up, but other than that, I think it is a ok script. Just keep ...

No comments or queries? No fan mail? No critisisms?

Hey, I just want to say good poem. You're right, manga is an art form of it's own.

I like this poem. Perhaps it is what a gray cloud feels like, because everyone hates them. Your word choise is also superb. Well done! However it does need some ...

This piece is quite good. The imagery was slap bang in the center of this writing. The title "Not Yet Broken" is a perfect fit to it. I think that ...

I quite like this piece. Thats what I am going to do! Click the like button!

I liked it!

I agree with BondGirl. What is this poem about?

Just goes to show, some people can change for the better...

Hahahahahahahaha! It is because I DON'T like Harry Potter I like this! Nice make fun!