skutter11

Thank you, with all due respect, skutter11

Well, thank you for that constructive critism, classy. I would just like to add that this little piece is an experiment with faerie stories, as I haven't really wrote one ...

A note to kiwi- A "gay" was usually a happy collection of people, I use archaic language a lot in these stories and, sometimes, archaic meanings too. And Nina, glad ...

Dear Readers, Thank you for your reviews. I am hoping to start other cycles of the World other than this one: -The Legend Cycle (as started in "The Beginning") -The ...

Thank you for the comments. Subzero, about the repetiton of "...of the oxen horns", in the Greek classics they did this quite a lot, infact I think it's known as ...

To explain the "that heathen down there" phrase. Basically, because she is looking down at the model of the World, she is literally looking at the ship, eventhough she is ...

Why, thank you.

Thanks guys! Lilymoore, I'll take your advise and dumb down the accent a bit. (I do actually speak like that. South Yorkshire accent, alot of thing left over from the ...

This poem, Aet, is a very good one. Short and to the point and I'll definatly try to avoid Aetdrug.

This meade me laugh so much I interupted my Sociology class... Anyway, well written and, strangly enough, it kept to the point at all times. Good parody right there!

Thanks guys!

Thank you Sheperd! I will make improvements on future works, so that I don't seem so distant from the reader!

Same reason as the other one. Locked!

Well, guys, it's been months and months, so I'm gonna lock this one.

Don't worry about it!