skeptik_225

by far the most incredible CD i've ever bought (and i've bought alot!) personal favs: White shadows Fix you (time a billion! makes me cry every time) a message swallowed ...

wow,,,what can I say? I bet you want constructive critisim but my tanks on empty after reading this. BEAUTIFUL imagery and very specific word choice, I liked that! I love ...

I see you in my dreams, so happy so free. How can that be when we are holding hands? Me and you. You and me together at last? This was ...

I’ve decided that I’m obsessed with using my high beams. Maybe because I’m a child of light (ya right) or that humans in general are vision dominant creatures. Imagine driving ...

pear

ok! i agree this is too simple but there's lots potential. I like the guitar alot! YAY guitar power. I suggest that you use it like you did in your ...

Last sacrifice Abundant potential Beautiful regrets Lingering doubts She can’t seem to forget Decaying in sorrow But he will soar For being apart Matters no more Dark rimmed glasses Friday ...

totally relate with the character 110%, and i dont think that the length of your writing needs improvement however if you do keep it a short paragraph, you need a ...

niiice, i like your angle and approach (not strange, unique) to the story but ya...maybe i'm a moron (its ok i'll admit it) but i didn't quite figure out what ...

That night, even the crickets cried. You'd have to be blind not to notice the dark gloomy shadows forming over my house. Momma's tears looked like they'd taste like salt. ...

Love your style and approach to a topic i too agree with...suggestion: break up the "poem" into paragraphs, its hard reading a big clump without getting lost, nicely done, i ...

thanx for your comments...they are most appreciated and thank you for deleting the million unnecessary forums i posted b4...i'm still very much new at this

My first posting! YAY! Every story has an introduction so i figure i need one too. here i go! Let 'er rip! Intro This is no curse An unlikely gift ...

gurl you need a hug! I'm reading this and I'm totally blown away by ur incredible imagery, passion, emotion, words and hell you rock. You're my hero, its it funny ...

why thank you all! i feel so special...these things work so fast! (my technological ignorance kicks in yet again) Wow! :D I feel very welcome!