skeptik_225

Bold, clear images, as usual outstanding poetry with this bold sentimental quality that balances out with the language. Personally, I felt a connection with this poem. I could praise forever ...

The repetative use of mechanical bride is, i agree, annoying to read but as previously mentioned, this is more or less, a spoken poem and the overuse of that word ...

Note: This poem is meant to be read aloud. Rated PG-13 due to language why is he in love with the mechanical bride nuts and bolts trail her every trail ...

length. Just a little tiny bit longer. I enjoy short poems, there's sometimes a stronger impact. The acrostic I didn't pick up on but its' late and I'm dumb, sorry ...

Lots of potential with this poem. As previously mentioned good rhyming and there's a strong sense of flow. The concept at intially, especially in the first 2 stanza was a ...

Effervescence: To emit small bubbles of gas, as a carbonated or fermenting liquid

The effervescence of my beer escapes my lips as my mouth parts and my eyes close It's as if the walls of the room conform to the shape of your ...

:D I love that Spongebob episode (I like the randomness) Beautiful poem, the first stanza especially drew me in nicely. All the If ____ is only ____'s were playful and ...

A tad on the repetative side but I enjoyed the concept. It was a little confusing at times to figure out who was "she" and "her" and "girl" whether that ...

i love this: "starstruck lovers in comets of beauty collide and explode and the rest of society is left to pick up the mangled pieces of broken hearts and stolen ...

I need help with this one, it doesn't flow right Drilled and invaded at the hands of hands unfit for invading; ones better left in the pockets of friendship not ...

As soon as I open my eyes, I dash to my desk, rummaging though the homework worksheet and old post-it notes to find some paper. Any paper, even paper written ...

YA!!! really like Bloc Party, especially Positive Tension, wicked awesome song :D

SNES owns! Super Mario Kart, Donkey Dong, SUper Mario Brothers and SUper Mario Three, Tetris, Earthworm Jim, Hook, Bubble Bobble, Yoshi's Cookie, Ninja Gaden, Ninja Turtles, Slapshot, NBA Jam, Yoshi's

saw it! loved it! told everyone and thier mom's about it! plan on watching IT again it!!