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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Blood, Water and Tears (redone)

    Hi! I really like this; the references to blood are moving for me. I have two suggestions/questions as well.... 1. "The winds are their murderers, the water their minion." I ...

    May 31, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Blood, Water and Tears (redone)

    Hi! I really like this; the references to blood are moving for me. I have two suggestions/questions as well.... 1. The winds are their murderers, the water their minion. I ...

    May 30, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Short poem

    A circle gos on forever just like the love you share. Just by saying hi you can brighten someones day so share all the love you can bare. This is ...

    Feb 25, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Lady Burlesque & Her Lovers

    Whoa! This poem is really interesting.... It was a little confusing the first time I read it, but now that I've reread it, I like it. It's short & sweet ...

    Apr 19, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Very Last Drop

    I'm having a really hard time understanding the meaning of this poem. I think that it's well written but there isn't a clear answer (or any answer for that matter) ...

    Apr 19, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: definition of her

    This poem was sort of like a part of an essay you might write about yourself. Or, like mizz-iceberg said, it was very similar to something I could read in ...

    Apr 19, 2008


"The trouble with Borrowing another mind was, you always felt out of place when you got back to your own body, and Granny was the first person ever to read the mind of a building. Now she was feeling big and gritty and full of passages. 'Are you all right?' Granny nodded, and opened her windows. She extended her east and west wings and tried to concentrate on the tiny cup held in her pillars."
— Terry Pratchett, Discworld: Equal Rites