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Re: Lucky You
I liked it, although I thought in some places your flow was destroyed
Aug 25, 2010 -
Re: Flee, A Haiku
what am I running from?
Aug 25, 2010 -
Re: The Healer
"Luke Verigo was a rich kid." alright, introduction to the protagonist right off the bat is a good idea. " "A usual, pampered and spoiled rich kid." I think usual ...
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Re: Bikers
Fuck man.. I just spent like an hour typing out stuff, and then hit the damn back button. anyways, Thanks for the replies, this is my weakest story for sure, ...
Aug 25, 2010 -
Re: Bikers
Six bikers were run off road by a semi. A man and a woman were dead, their motorcycles in ruins. There were still four bikers alive. One of those four ...
Aug 25, 2010
