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singdawg

  • Other Poetry Re: Lucky You

    I liked it, although I thought in some places your flow was destroyed

    Aug 25, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Flee, A Haiku

    what am I running from?

    Aug 25, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: The Healer

    "Luke Verigo was a rich kid." alright, introduction to the protagonist right off the bat is a good idea. " "A usual, pampered and spoiled rich kid." I think usual ...

    Aug 25, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Bikers

    Fuck man.. I just spent like an hour typing out stuff, and then hit the damn back button. anyways, Thanks for the replies, this is my weakest story for sure, ...

    Aug 25, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Bikers

    Six bikers were run off road by a semi. A man and a woman were dead, their motorcycles in ruins. There were still four bikers alive. One of those four ...

    Aug 25, 2010


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