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Round three. Cyrin laughed bitterly. “Do you think we believe for a moment that you aren’t gaining anything from this, too?” Sparrow gave him a pitying look. “Did you get ...

Hello SilverNight. Round 2. “Just let me know if you need somewhere to go because you burned your place down.” Clarity grinned, swirling the contents of her glass. “It’s always ...

Hello SilverNight. Here we go. "as Shane walked up the carpeted marble steps, the weight of the heavy and grim atmosphere felt like it was pushing him down the stairs, ...

Hello. Following a KateHardy review won't be easy, but I'll do my best. I'm about 5 minutes in, and you have done a great job helping me understand Andrea's desperate ...

Hello, I just finished your story. You did a good job showing the character's strong relationship before introducing the tragedy. I'm unsure if you have explained what was going on ...

Hello, just finished your story, it was intriguing. What I enjoyed most was the stages of understanding Koko goes through. The observations, then curiosity, then shame, then acceptance of oneself ...

Good job with this one. You can really understand the character's desire for a simple life surrounded by nature. I was surprised by the ending, but I realize you may ...

You do a great job painting a picture with this one. I can imagine the family dinner downstairs and the purposeful chaos of the bedroom. I can see feet up ...