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  • Romantic Novels Re: As if I was in Love Chp 3 (edited)

    Wow. This is really good. I agree with everyone about the flashback, it shows you how this first started and why her mother and the girl had a fight. One ...

    Nov 29, 2008
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: DELETED STORY! DONT OPEN

    story deleted.

    Nov 3, 2008
  • Romantic Novels Re: As if I was in Love Chp 2 (edited)

    also, i didnt know the girls name or history besides when you mentioned it. what happened in her past that made her mother like this? How did she and aaron ...

    Oct 27, 2008
  • Romantic Novels Re: As if I was in Love Chp 2 (edited)

    I paused for a second and reconsidered my options, “Fine. Let’s go.” I said opening, and walking out the door. what are the optionss??? i wanna know(: anyway, i couldn't ...

    Oct 27, 2008
  • Romantic Novels Re: As if I was in Love 1 (edited)

    I loved this. girl, your ahmazing with words. I know i spelled ahmazing wrong. jeez, calm down. life is not a spelling contest(: anyway, this was amazing, a marvelous story. ...

    Oct 27, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Pre-face - no name - story 2.

    Pre - face(: I never thought i would sink this low, that my feelings would over come me. Well, there was no turning back now. I knew I was never ...

    Oct 27, 2008
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Marked

    “Why not,” He asked question mark there. “I’m staying.” Brian said firmly. I think that would need an exclamation mark instead of a period. “My temper is hard to control ...

    Sep 11, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: NO name yet, any ideas, thoughts?

    Even though the pain that seared through her ankle to her mid-leg, Mellanie had the chance to scream at her brother for not driving fast enough (in her brother's 2008 ...

    Sep 6, 2008


Thou call'dst me a dog before thou hadst cause. But, since I am a dog, beware my fangs.
— Shylock, The Merchant of Venice