simmy90

That was really good. This actually reminds me a bit of a situation I was going through just a few weeks ago, only I was the Annie in your story. ...

I prayed that nightmares hadn’t visited her [s]that night[/s]. I agree with the other reviewer about this one. brushed her cheek ; her eyes flickered open. Just my opinion, but ...

This was a really good chapter! You developed not only Allysa's character quite well, but the story in and of itself. I fully did not expect an already-dead John Smith ...

“The kids talkin’ bout him already?” she said, going back to pounding. “Suppose that makes sense. ‘E was a soldier, sent here to deliver a message to your father, but ...

I like this story so far, but I agree with the first reviewer, you need to describe settings a bit more. The wording used in this story makes me think ...

It was an interesting plot-line, but I have to agree with the first person to review. Make sure to use spell-check everytime you post something and read it over and ...

"Sometimes… being a coward is the bravest thing you can do.” Did you make this up yourself or find it in some other book or on the internet? Either way, ...

The rave: This is an interesting era to write about. Just the whole "legend" behind the history of this, lynching of the accused but innocent. Might I suggest to you ...

This is quite a heart-rending tale, not necessarily of courage (although it showed when the six-year-old boy refused to get on the train and then when the mother said she ...

Interesting idea you've got there. I've only ever been a fan of Lily/Snape fanfiction when it came down to the idea that Snape will forever be pining after her, but ...

First off: Very well-written story; second off: Spell out numbers. All of them; thirdly: I really liked how you described everything: the dress, Jasper, how Alice was waiting impatiently. And ...