silversublime

His eyes glittered with snow. I have seen cloudy eyes, leafy eyes, fiery eyes, but never eyes that shone with the crystal fairies of winter. Yet here they danced before ...

This is good! It gave me the perfect feeling of calm and relaxation. just a few things: "Through my eyelids closed I can see the sun falling" 'closed eyelids' would ...

It's so great to see such friendly people here! :) I like to write any kind of poetry and short stories, but yeah like I said, I don't finish much ...

Has anyone heard of them? It seems like they are pretty obscure but they are a great band! I just got their CD "Like Vines" and I can't stop listening ...

Hi everyone! My name is Carmen. I love to write, but I don't finish most of what I try to write. Grrrrr, procrastination. I also like reading, drawing (although I'm ...

I open my eyes to see a man cloaked in white fire. His clothes are white (white as the moon that spits waves of mocking light over earth by night.) ...

This poem isn't very original and there's nothing in it that I've never seen before. It actually would work well as song lyrics, but as poetry it's just mediocre. I ...

This is my first critique on here, so I can't promise that I'll be much help since i don't really know what I'm doing, but I'll try my best. This ...