silverkey

Depressed.

Thank you for the review. C: I'll take everything you said into consideration, and I'll work on editing it again. I just find it really hard to pinpoint the things ...

Some grammar-y things first: “Yes grandma.” we would reply, me and my twin brother Darren. Then we would look outside with her, and watch the fluffy white clouds roll across ...

Thanks for the review. It's really helpful. The first stanza actually was the most recent part of the poem I wrote, so I suppose it did come off as disconnected. ...

Once upon a time, I set my sights, On a perpetual eye in the storm, A dazzling isle surrounded by night. I feel the waves crashing around me, Stranded alone ...

Yeah, the title is sort of related to Peter Pan, but I'm also referencing another work. xD *cookies* Hey, Rach (and Ribbit). I've got a monkey in my head that ...

Thanks! Out of all of those, I've only read 1984, which I really enjoyed (I love George Orwell. We're going to read Animal Farm for school which makes me happy.), ...

I would say yes. I don't know if it's just because loads of Filipinos are very superstitious, and somehow, that's leaked on over to me. My mom says that her ...

Some grammar nitpicky things first: The sky was blue, the clearest blue in the past week. The wind ruffled through the trees, a nice breeze compared to the harsh winds ...

Waves crash around me, Stranded alone on a little boat, Drenching me in cold clarity. Thunder, booming high above, Tendrils of mist reaching out, Lightning, slicing through the fog. I ...

Thanks! c: I've read some of Neil Gaiman's works (Smoke & Mirrors, Anansi Boys, Good Omens, and Interworld) and I'm hoping to read more in the future. I haven't read ...

You've improved very much. c: I don't have much critique to give that the others haven't already given. P: Just a suggestion: I think you can do without the last ...

Snoink: Ooh, that's pretty neat. What sci-fi books would you recommend (both on and off YWS)? c: I could probably persuade some of my friends to join. >:3 But I ...

Razcoon: Thanks! c: Yay, another Doctor Who fan. Have you watched any Old Who? KatTrain: Thank you. :D Snoink: I've read that one, I think it's amazing. :D Haha, I ...

I'll admit here and now that I was confused by much of the prologue, which was your intention, but it wasn't because of the language. It's probably more understandable now ...