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Here is yet another one of my NaPo poems. I'm not too fond of the last stanza so if you have any better suggestions please let me know! All comments ...

Awe, I love this poem! I wish I could go back to when I was younger and everything was simplier... There weren't any errors or suggestsions that I could find, ...

I really liked the idea of the story, it was interesting. It actually kind of reminded me of the movie "I am Number Four", which is about a guy from ...

Well I'm not too sure how to critque lyrics, since I am not musically inclined. However, I did enjoy the lyrics. I think it could make a really good song. ...

Wow, I loved the poem :) There was some great imagery and symbolism in this poem. I couldn't find any corrections or suggestions. Well, actually I think that you could ...

I really enjoyed your poem! It was short and straight to the point. However, I agree with tydecker, that the last line kind of threw off the flow. The rest ...

Ahahahaha! I loved this poem! The rythmn and ryhmning were both amazing. I loved the story and idea behing it. It was cute and creative. I think it also shows ...

Ahahaha, this poem was really good! It was both funny and well-written. I know a guy that is kind of similar to this... he just loves causing conflict and being ...

Awe, this was so good! Very sad. I could definetly hear this as a ballad. There was a lot of great emotion here. My only suggestion would be to perhaps ...

Thanks alot! (I followed you too) (: Okay, I will see if I could fix up the rythmn. What were some lines that you had trouble with? (This goes for ...

Great poem! It was short and sweet (: This is definetly me, I can be really quiet or really loud and weird. Ahahahhaa. I think you got your idea across ...

I really enjoyed this poem. It was cute, and I think everyone can relate to this. We all have our friends that we wouldn't be able to live without. Here ...

Thank you both! (: And to JJxVoodo you can read my poem "My Own Worst Enemy" It's not exactly the same, but if you are like me then you might ...

There is some really strong and great emotion in this piece. Really enjoyed reading it! :) Here are just my comments and suggestions: I hate you. Good way to get ...

I love this poem!