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Re: First Attempt
Ouu I really like this! It's amazing (: I really like the way you drew him and to me the shading looks really good! I personally didn't think that the ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: Before she raped him...
The title of this really drew me in. I think that you have a really good and unique idea here. It is not often that you see the girl as ...
May 17, 2011 -
Re: Sometimes You Have to Let Go
First off, I would just like to say that this poem was actually really good! I know you seemed kind of worried about it, but its definetly not as bad ...
May 17, 2011 -
Re: Fragile
This poem is really short, but somehow you still manage to fit so much emotion into it. With only a few lines, I was able to understand what was happening. ...
May 16, 2011 -
Re: Romeo & Juliet: Instant Messaging Edition
Ahahahah, I loved this! It was very entertaing and amusing... eesh never knew I could actually enjoy reading shakespeare this much :P This is a really unique assignment, and I ...
May 16, 2011 -
Re: Nationality Headcount at YWS
American: 26 Canadian: 6 English: 13 Filipino: 6 Finnish: 2 French: 2 Indian: 6 Irish: 1 Italian: 1 Puerto Rican: 1 Scottish: 1 South African: 1 South Korean: 1 Welsh: ...
May 13, 2011 -
Re: She was known for her disappearances
I think you have a really good story here. I like your writing style and the story is interesting. The only issue that really stood out to me was this ...
May 11, 2011 -
Re: Personal Portal to Paradise
I really enjoyed this poem :) It was really well-written and had a good concept. You had some really nice descriptive words and imagery in here. I agree with what ...
May 10, 2011 -
Re: Wyvern
This was a really interesting story. I loved the way you ended off! I will be honest, that the beginning was a little slow for me. However, the middle (especially ...
May 10, 2011 -
Re: Dylan, I Hardly Knew Ya
I really enjoyed reading this story. The emotion was very strong at the end, and it was easy to sympathize with her. The story is cliche, and I personally hate ...
May 10, 2011 -
Re: I hate you.
Loved this poem! The emotion was very strong. I also think that this poem is very easy to relate to. You did a good job of getting your point across. ...
May 9, 2011 -
Re: Math Class Dreams
Ahahaha, this was a cute poem. It made me smile. (: I know exactly how you must have been feeling while writing this poem.. especially with math class I just ...
May 9, 2011 -
Re: No Manual
I really enjoyed reading this. It was interesting. Many of us have those moments when we doubt who we are and who we want to be. I'm sure many other ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: Dreams Are For You
I loved the message behind this poem, very powerful! However, I stumbled over some words as I was reading it. It didn't seem to flow that smoothly. Also, you switched ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: If You Fell...
Aww, I really enjoyed this poem! Short and sweet, well in a sad way. I think it really goes well with the other poem. (I actually read and reviewed that ...
May 8, 2011
