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Actually, yeah it doesn't make a huge difference so I would just leave it however you like :)

hehehe thank you! :) ohh yeah i procastinate so much.. its bad :P Yeahh i don't think the word "thinner" was the best choice but i thought that it kind ...

I am awful when it comes to procrastination, so I decided to write a poem on it just for fun. Let me know what you think! :) The day is ...

Great peom, it was short and sweet :) My only suggestion is that in the 3rd line, you get rid of the word "together". I think that it flows better ...

I really like the theme of the poem :) It's simple and well written. The only part that confused me was: Into mature's maze I'm not sure if you meant ...

Thanks for the advice :) ! Oh and for the second stanza I was rhmying "great" with "fake". I know it's not a perfect rhyme, but I tried :P I ...

This is a really well-written poem! I really enjoyed it. The flow was good except it was sort of interupted at these two parts: Your letting go of Me. Leagues ...

I'll be honest, I read this just because of the song. I absolutely love the song, it's so cute yet sad.

This poem was short and sweet. (: It had a good message but told it in a cute way!

Please give me your brutally honest opinion and any advice that you have! (: When asked if I’m okay, I simply say that I’m fine, If someone asks what’s wrong, ...

This is a poem that I wrote last year for my religion project, which was on temptation. Let me know you think (good or bad) Thanks! I know that you ...

This poem was really soothing but with a dark feel to it. This is a unique combination, which I really enjoyed. There is some great imagery and vocab in this ...

This poem was incredible. I really enjoyed it! The only thing that annoyed me was when you would change the font around. I think that the first part in quotes ...

I really liked the way you made this poem rhyme. I personally just enjoy those types of poems better. I think that overall this was really good. It is short ...

Wow, this was really good! I loved your beggining and ending. It has a dark feeling to it, which I really liked. This is a common theme, especially amongst teenagers, ...