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8. Giving In The excitement that once filled me, Has all drained away, Leaving me to feel empty, And like there’s no way. All possibilities are over, I’ve finally given ...

Wow, I really loved this poem! There was a lot of emotion and passion. I think that this is a very relatable poem. It is easy to connect to and ...

7. Searching For Something More Side by side we walk, Chatting away, We haven’t said much, Yet, been talking all day. Loud cars drive by, As the sun burns our ...

Eek.. this one is really bad! I want to go to bed so I quickly wrote something in fifteen minutes. I couldn't think of anything better in such short time. ...

Wow, this was so good! There was so much emotion, in such a short story. This was a great representation of love, and I think that everyone can relate to ...

I really enjoyed this poem, especially the story. It was really well-written. The ending was my favourite part But I'll stay here just for you. I will... ..Just lie and ...

I know you said you didn't really care for this poem, but I actually really liked it. If this is "bad" to you, then you other work must be very ...

This was a very well-written and thought provocting poem. I really enjoyed it :) I couldn't find anything wrong with it, so I won't be much help. You definetly have ...

I really liked this story. I know that this wasn't your point, but I found it very easy to relate to. I share a lot of the same thoughts and ...

This is something that I wrote two years ago. I tried fixing it up, but if you have any further suggestions feel free to let me know! Hope you enjoy ...

I read a few of your poem on here, and they are all really good! I enjoyed them (: You definetly have talent!

I really liked this poem! Its easy to relate to and sympathize with. There were no issues that I could find. Maybe just the flow in a few spots, though. ...

5. Bring Me Back To The Days Bring me back to the days, When the sun was my blanket, And the wind was my fan. The days when ice-cream was ...

4. Becoming Drained Heavy eyelids, And stumbling feet, All I want to do, Is go to sleep. My fuzzy mind, Is on a delay, I'll answer your question, in a ...

Ahahaha! I really liked this, it was short and sweet. Just one small suggestion: Or else will take a hike! I would change the will to I'll. That's only my ...