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Re: It was only one date.
There isn't a lot for me to review here, since it is so short. I wouldn't really even call it a story, but rather part of a story. You did ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Bathroom Walls
I really liked this poem. It had a powerful and difficult topic, and I think you portrayed it well. I especially liked the last stanza when the mother and daughter ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: This Time
I really like this story! It is clear that you are a talented writer (: The plot is exciting, the story is well-writen, and your characters are very dynamic and ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Gravestone pt.2
I'm really liking this story! Your dialouge and characters are very realistic. I can really see and feel things from the MC's point of view. You have that character to ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Gravestone *edited
I am really enjoying this story so far! I think you should continue it, I really want to see where it goes (: My only major problem with this story ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Dear Hanna
Wow.. this was so good! There was a lot of strong emotion throughout. By the end I actually thought I was going to cry. I think if you continued writing, ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Drivers Never Sleep (possible title)
I am thinking of using this story for a contest. Not entirely sure yet though. Your suggestions and opinion would be really beneficial! Thanks and hope you enjoy (: “I’m ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: The Summer I Wish I Didn't Remember
I wrote this a couple of years ago for school. Now that I read it over again, I can see that it could use some work. Your help and suggestions ...
Aug 17, 2011 -
Re: Hell's Occupant - [Falling Contest - snowberry23]
I really liked this story! It had a strong mood and atmosphere to it, very dark and sad. I also liked how you wrote their "conversation" in a way that ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: Summer
Aww this is so cute! I love it
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: Hello. (Contest entry)
I thought this was a really well-written story! I enjoyed it throughout and was drawn in by the first line (: You really portrayed the character perfectly. It was obvious ...
Aug 12, 2011 -
Re: Two pieces of flash fiction (Redux)
I think you did a really good job with this piece, considering how few words you were limited to (: Even with such a short piece you managed to give ...
Aug 10, 2011 -
Re: Plain Old Jane
I enjoyed reading this story (: The main idea behind the story is kind of over-done... but the way you wrote it made it unique. I like your writing style ...
Aug 9, 2011 -
Re: The Massiveness of How Sad It Is to Want Someone (1)
Wow... This was amazing! I was drawn in immediately by your title. It is just so unique and it screamed to me "read me, read me" ahahahah so of course ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: Devourer of Souls chapter 2!
Wow! I am really liking this story! It is very interesting and I want to keep reading more. You will have to tell me when you post the next chapter ...
Jul 21, 2011
